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About a jacket. Recently i went shopping, wandered into a shop, and just while loosing hope about finding something I saw something bright red in the corner of my eye. intrigued I took it off the rack, a used plaid jacket. I tried it on, and after some complements I bought it, half off, what a deal! Pulling the 'used' tag off I could only wonder: who owned it before me? So here I am, writing about this glorious person who parted ways with this jacket, maybe outgrowing it after having children. Or just not wanting it.About a jacket. by ~Jessicah-pal
So, this red jacket, it could have been worn to a concert, or many. Thrashing in a mosh pit. or jumping up and down screaming the lyrics to a
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these are pieces that inspire me, or just down right amaze me! |